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Saturday, December 10, 2016

Research on a Jimmy Santiago Baca's Poem

From Violence to Peace :

" I went back, to re-live 
destruction… 
                  “Felipe!” I yelled, porch light 
                  flicked on, illuminating the yard. 
                  “Came to fight,” I said, “take off 
                  your glasses.” 

Bug-eyes glazed 
bewildered, then gray slits of lips 
snarled, “You motherless dog!” 
He withdrew in darkness a moment, 
reappeared on porch, serrated saw of his voice 
cut the chill dark, 
                  “¡Hijo de su pinche madre! 
                   ¡Mátalo!   ¡¡Mátalo!!” 

First shot framed darkness round me 
with a spillway of bright light, 
eruption of sound, and second shot roared 
a spray of brilliance and the third 
gave an expanded halo-flash. 
My legs woozed, and then 
I buckled to the ground. 
                  (I thought, holy shit, what ever happened 
                  to the old yard-style fight between estranged friends!) " 

-The connection i have made from these few stanzas were that it is very true. People now-a-days don't clean handed fight. They have to use some sort of weapon. They have to use a weapon to feel superior. That's very relate able here in Santa Maria, you hardly hear of a clean fight. 

"Following morning calls came, 
“Tell us who did it Gato!” 
“Our rifles are loaded!” 
                  I said, “Leave it alone. What would you do 
                            if a drunk man came into your yard, 
                            threatened to beat you?” 
I wanted peace,"
-What i have to say from this piece is that, I can't relate to that. What i usually see or hear about is people trying to seek revenge. If they lose a fight they get their friends involved or they "rush" the other person. Even if the fight was caused by them, they have to keep going until they win. In my opinion it takes a real man to accept the fact that you win some and lose some. 

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Monday, December 5, 2016

Something Intresting

To me something interesting was that i actually really liked reading the poem penned by Jimmy Santiago Baca. I am not the type of student to really be into poetry. Most poems are just boring! Out of tons that i was forced to read through out my school years, this one by far is my favorite. That i was NOT forced to read! Students and lots of other individuals can actually make lots of connections to this poem. Police shooting for no reason? RELATE-ABLE. Young teens, dropping out of school selling drugs and fighting in the streets? RELATE-ABLE. But what's most relate-able is having your dreams crushed. Not by friends or parents, surprisingly, most students, that i know of have been doubted by their teachers and it just ruins all your dreams. Because the one person who is supposed to educate you and help you get a great job and achieve your dreams, is the one who will doubt you and ruin them. I am not saying ALL teachers, but i know of some. So this poem is amazing, it just left me speechless. I can re-read this poem without getting tired of it. Well written. ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. Thank you Dr. Preston for having this assigned to us. By far, best thing I've read in your class. :-)  

Thursday, December 1, 2016

NOTES #2

Theme : Having your expectations let down.
Tone : wise , accepting the harsh reality
Mood : serious, realistic
Devices : metaphor?